Well it’s supposed to be a comedic parody of a film noir detective film ( whatever that is), so won’t the test really be on how clever a parody it is? In effect, the ADD could be secondary. If it’s funny then does it really matter? If not, it’s a bomb and no one will want to watch it anyway. Let’s face it, all someone needs to do is read some of our posts on this site about what we’ve done or forgotten and then they’ll have real fodder for dark comedy 
